[55 Fiction] – Red!

28 May

 

 She looked at me with her luscivious eyes, her lips deep red. With every sip of the spirit that took me on a high, I fell deeper and deeper in them.

I walked over to her. We spoke in unmuted silence. We walked together to the other side of the “fence”!

Yes. I am Positive.

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12 Responses to “[55 Fiction] – Red!”

  1. megzone May 28, 2010 at 10:55 pm #

    waaahhh… now even you are dabbling in 55-er 😀
    massttt…
    did that positive mean.. HIV 🙄
    dont glare im just conphused 😳

    • Himanshu May 28, 2010 at 10:58 pm #

      @ Megzy
      Thankies!! 🙂
      //did that positive mean.. HIV//–puurrrfffaaacccttt! 🙂

  2. sushobhan May 28, 2010 at 11:42 pm #

    Nice one.. 🙂

    A sensuous 55 fiction tale with a brilliant irony at the end..

    I guess its HIV Positive.. 🙂

    • Himanshu May 29, 2010 at 9:04 pm #

      You guessed it right Susho. Thanks for visiting! 🙂

  3. Alphs May 29, 2010 at 12:58 am #

    That was fantastic Manshu! 🙂

  4. Annapoorani sivaramakrishnan May 29, 2010 at 6:56 am #

    Himanshu,tat was a brilliant entry,the winning entry i must say.you rock wit ur post and itz alwayz a visual treat 4 us to read ur post.am yet to read ur gotra post.l get back.

  5. shweta May 29, 2010 at 1:40 pm #

    mast ch lihal ahes agadi.
    sadhya Ch1 var kai 55 words madhe story lihayachi vagere ashi kahi competition ahe ka??
    sharma ne pan lihal ahe bahutek…
    tula ch 1st prize milanar 🙂
    u rock 🙂

  6. Himanshu May 29, 2010 at 9:06 pm #

    @ Alphs
    Thanks a tonne! 🙂

    @ Annapoorani
    And I dont have to state how much I look forward to reading your comments. :-)Thanks a zillion!

    @ Shweta
    Thank you. Ch1 var competition chalu aahe. Tula participate karaycha ahe ka?
    prize kasla dombal.. me tar asach suchta te lihito..

  7. Sushant June 19, 2010 at 8:16 pm #

    Aawadla!

  8. p1 September 11, 2010 at 7:41 pm #

    way up there !!

    • Himanshu September 14, 2010 at 6:12 pm #

      Thanks for stopping by buddy!

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